Winning Paper Revision


I think a lot of students feel like they’re in a no-win situation when it comes to writing. That’s a problem. Unfortunately, there’s only so much a teacher can do within a classroom, and then the rest rests on the student’s motivation.

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TRY: Professor, you drenched my paper in red ink!
HOBO: Yes, because it's full of grammatical errors.

TREY: Right, so I removed all the errors.
HOBO: You just deleted any words or phrases I circled.

HOBO: You made it worse, because now it makes no sense!
TREY: So you're saying I was literally in a no-win situation?


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